Ok, I know short stories cant really be full of detail and plotline, so I guess I shouldnt be that surprised.. but damn.. this is bad..
Its a shifter story, and the premise is Ok, but the writing... *shakes head*
Just the fact that the two boys, Blake and Joam, "fall in love" 2 seconds after they meet, ruins everything.. I cant stand it, when that happens.. but again, its a short story, so it has to be rushed, just not this fast for Gods sake..
There is also a blowjob while Joam is in doggie-mode..
Yes, thats what I said.. A dog blowjob.. *rolls eyes*